[quote=@Prince of Seraphs] Could you define "super-subjective-ism" for me. I tried looking it up but all the definitions I found didn't seem to fit with any aspect of storytelling. Also just in general as a story what did you think of it? Yeah, Abel's thing was that he was essentially the Fred and George Weasly of Beacon. In the first draft there was a prank he pulled in Combat Class and just in general enough interaction to make that clear. Also if [@KabenSaal] is interested Mokuren was for lack of a better way to put it like Priscilla except much more of a girly girl. She was also one of Shiro's three girlfriends (the others being Sangue and Diamond). Oh and [@paigesweetheart] Priscilla was a by the book hardass sergeant and Goodwitch's right hand. Amy got dishonorably discharged and promptly imprisoned when it was discovered she was a Vacuo spy. [/quote] Shiro had three girlfriends? Did...did I miss something>? O.e;