Don't worry, it looks good, Saltwater ;)

About the only little detail that I would point out is that the White Hand tend to primarily train mages on a more advanced level within combat oriented magic. Although they sponsor the training of future recruits, the mainly let the other magical academies in Stormwind teach the students the basics and mid level before they finally join the more advanced courses available in Honor's Watch.

Edit; and yes, Rae is definitely OP! Unfortunately though, she must have spent all her points in combat stats, while not so much in strategy & tactics :P