[@Shadowcatcher] Read through the Bijuu-things. Seems like a short time to get accepted (only four years), but I'll allow it.



[@Hebigami Shiho] Character evaluation. 
First off, appearance. I reacted to the fact that she has boats on her arms and ladders on her boots (obviously inviting little people to climb in), but also her pale skin. What we've seen of people from Kumo (as far as I know) is that they are noticably darker than people from other villages. 
While on the subject of Kumo-stuff, creds for following the naming tradition.
History, might be nitpicking, but a Chuunin leading an elite force? Seems far fetched, but again, details. Rest is all good.
Jutsus, I count only nine. 
"Cloud Style Flame Beheading" from the description I get the mental image that there is a short delay between the sword and the flames, is this correct?
I think you have a decent balance and understanding of the ranking system.



[@Tatsua Aiisen] Character evaluation.
You're obviously much more of a character player than the rest of us. Normally this isn't a problem, and while I love many things about this character I honestly believe that it is not suited for this type of game. The changes needed to make this character acceplatble would probably break the original concept. If you want to join, I suggest you pick another character concept.