[@Shard] Alright, we talked about it on Skype, and we decided that Casper could use a bit more detail. To me, he seems a little one-dimensional. I mean, there isn't a lot to know about him ([url=http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/28vbfi/ot_looking_to_develop_your_characters_heres_100/]This site[/url] can help), and his appearance could be expanded a bit. However, the main thing that bothers us is the fact that his power section is so barebones (Only one sentence). That section in particular needs more to it.

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