Ok, i've changed the marker from apply to full. We're too many as it is... [@Hebigami Shiho] I'd say you've fixed everything I asked you to, so you're good. [quote=@1Charak2] actually okay a extract from the naruto wiki (which is where i got my infomation the jutsu's) says While most summoners have only been shown capable of summoning one type of creature, Nagato (through the Animal Path) was able to summon several different animals and even people, and seemingly did not require a blood offering when performing this technique. Sasuke is able to summon both snakes and hawks, though he has never been seen summoning both species at the same time. so yea but thats the rinnegan or the sharingan both of which are dojutsu i was going for the idea of a commanding role like the commander wouldn't actually fight in combat yet guide his "troops" to victory. so thats what the concept of my kekkai genkai was to do with the summons The Oni is a forced summon that is pretty much as hard to control as a runaway horse unless fed constantly with chakra (from people inside (its a slow process ) The giant electric eel was his first contracted summon so it does respond willingly but won't stick around once the job is done The wisp and the owl and the fox are also willing summon's The reanimated remains of a dead dragon is a forced creature and finally The platform lizard is basically a pet so it comes willingly upon call how did get he get all these contracts you ask well then as stated in the anime and manga most summons reside within certain place's like the toads mt myoboku or for the snakes the cave which i can't remember the name, as well as the slug's forest, it shows that most summons have a place of residency so if someone was to travel to these place's and garner contract's thats how it would work. except in the case of the oni and the dead dragon, both of them are summoned out of seal's located on their scroll's I hope this clears it up if not please recommend what needs to be changed [/quote] Yes, this is exactly what I'm talking about. Thank you for clearing it up this far, but I'd like to take it one step further. Mind you, I have not yet read your updated character, so this might be fixed... I'd like to know how your character came into contact with so many creatures, how he convinced them to sign a contract och how he could force his will upon them. As for the summoning technique. I'm saying that while it is true that we've not seen anyone in the series that have summoned more than one creature at a time. We've neither been given any indicator that this would be impossible aside from the summoner only having acontract with one type of animal (and because of this, no other creature will come willingly). So, in short: I'll let you use the normal summoning techniqiue to gain all the advantages of your bloodline limit, without the drawbacks. Just keep in mind (just like everyone else) that summoning drains chakra, so you won't be able to spam. [quote=@Shadowcatcher] How many people are we going to be having now? [/quote] We'll still be a five member team. The mad catter is working on a side-project and won't be "in the team" as we know it. Right now we have two people fighting for the last open spot. I'll head over to the characters and have a look around.