[quote=@Weird Tales]
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The back story was a way of explaining a human being with great powers since humans in dbz are not very strong. I wanted to create a character with a mysterious feel to him and that would wear a smart suit. I'll try to fix up the grammar but I really want to use this character
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Well in the end my biggest complaint was certainly grammar issues, so as long as you can fix that up I'll probably approve, which it looks like in the CS you have already done so good job there.  Ya, if you can keep your grammar I'll accept your character.  Oh and, just saying but ya missed a period at the end of this quote.  Forgive me but I tend to notice things like this pretty easily, heh.