[quote=@Mr Allen J]
[@Apokalipse] Both characters are fiiiine, but I think you could expand their power sections a bit. Both of their sections are underdetailed, and one sentence. I'd like at least a paragraph.
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Okay, I made it so each is 3 to more sentences.

EDIT: Also, you should make a chatzy so we can all chat (: It helps bond people together and get to know the personality of the people behind the characters. But this is only if you want to...>.<