[@goodmorrowtou] Hey, I almost missed the sheet you posted. It looks good, but could I make a small request that you do a small edit of Dempsey's 'Memories' section to be a little less... [i]colloquial dialogue[/i]. I enjoy characterisation through unique speech just as much as the next guy, but I had a little trouble figuring out just what was going on. Also, i'd recommend a few more memories; they tend to not stick around for too long. Other than that though, your character is pretty much ready. 

[@Laue] Still good though ;)