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I am incredibly reluctant to allow Artemis to have an imaginary friend, however I will allow it as long as it is not over-done, over-dramatic, and you create a bullying situation that is not realistic and make it generally over the top. The personalities need work - there are too many positive personality traits than negative personality traits. In order to create a character, you need to give them a rough, negative personality to start with in order to have more character development throughout the plot. Or, at the very least, have a balance of positive and negative traits. Neither of your characters have this.


Thanks. I've decided this is not the RP for me. I'll remove my characters. Please delete any posts containing their details ^_^
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Seeing as there aren't many characters in the same years and houses, should we omce up with some existing relationships between characters?
@Phloem, maybe Dor and Lu could be friends since they're in the same year?
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An easy way to get all our characters together would be to throw them all in some club or group, or a situation for them all to deal with right at the start.
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Seeing as there aren't many characters in the same years and houses, should we omce up with some existing relationships between characters?
@Phloem, maybe Dor and Lu could be friends since they're in the same year?


An easy way to get all our characters together would be to throw them all in some club or group, or a situation for them all to deal with right at the start.


I changed up my CS to a different age/year/pic to match the majority of other characters. To make it easier in game for everyone to interact and know each-other.

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If you guys want, we could always have all of the characters be first years so we can roleplay from year 1 all the way to year 7.

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Thanks. I've decided this is not the RP for me. I'll remove my characters. Please delete any posts containing their details ^_^


Okay, good luck in any other RPs you join.

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1 -- Added

2 -- Fixed

3 --

"Having traits of every house" -- Read 4 below please

"witnessing death" - Deleted, since that was more just an explanation for seeing the thestrals

"her mom going insane" -- I just wanted one sad/dark/interesting family/life thing in there or then her whole life would have been obnoxiously perfect.

"her dad becoming distant" - Kind of what happens to a guy when the love of his life/wife is forever insane, grief/blame and so on.

"showing signs at a young age". - some wizards do and some dont, like some babies walk before others, some learn to talk fast. Thats all I meant by it.

4 -- I added more on to this, so everyone can comprehend what I was going for and meant. No one really fits perfectly and completely in one category, they just show more aptitude for one then others, or are more prone to acting and seeing things a certain way then another. And I have read/watch the books/movies, and have scoured the harry potter wikia (and pottermore) just to make sure on this. But during the sorting ceremony the child opinion/choice towards which house they end up in weight heavily on the decision. Like Harry being could have been Slytherin, Hermione could have been ravenclaw, and Luna is kinda of out of the box anyway. But I can change from Rain Bird to somthing else if you see a problem.

To me, it seemed as if your character was leaning more towards the other houses, but I will look it over once more. Also, with the "shwoing signs at a young age" I had thought that you were saying she was gifted at it, my apologies. Her dad becoming distant and her mom being insane are okay now that the whole seeing-thestrals-and-saw-grandaddy-died are out of the picture. I will look over your CS before I accept it, but there probably shouldn't be much trouble with it

I would like to say that I know I'm being a little harsh, and I'm trying to be nice about it, but I've had experiences in my past RPs where I had virtually accepted everyone due to not wanting to hurt anybody's feelings and the RP hadn't turned out well. Also, I have been in RPs where there would be great writers...but also terrible writers, and while you have to practice to get good, it hampered and greatly affected the fun factor for everybody else. Like I said, I'm not trying to be mean, so don't take anything I say as a personal attack ^_^
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Oh hon I totally understand, and admire the fact that you have the courage to stand up and run your RP exactly how you want. When I make my own RPs I still have a very hard time saying no, or telling someone to change something.
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Oh hon I totally understand, and admire the fact that you have the courage to stand up and run your RP exactly how you want. When I make my own RPs I still have a very hard time saying no, or telling someone to change something.


Thanks! I'm glad there's no hard feelings ^_^
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Accepted! ^_^
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Yay! Thank you.
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I can't wait for this to start! Excited!
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I wonder how Ame will get to the school. She doesn't have two pennies, let alone Knuts, to rub together.
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Seeing as there aren't many characters in the same years and houses, should we omce up with some existing relationships between characters?
@Phloem, maybe Dor and Lu could be friends since they're in the same year?


Totally. Also, ignore how this reply's two days late, was busy getting my ass kicked by work. :P
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Lol we've all been there
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@c3p-0h We've met before. Do you remember this at all: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/62104-rune-factory-rp/ooc
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haha yeah i was wondering where i knew you from
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@c3p-0h Do you think Aja can become like a big sister character to Amelia?
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sure! aja has 4 younger siblings, so she has good practice.
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Are any of those siblings mute though, is the big question.
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