@Inertia you do realise your lot; Seth, Akane, Ruki, Haruki, Hikaru, Yoshino, and Gregor, Are all at the school.
Where as, Ren and Maggie are standing in the middle of a street somewhere else? (With the creepy guy offering the prospect of a dead body)

Or did Hikaru follow Ren and maggie?

Also taking another quick glance at Haruki, with Akane still being stuck to him like glue, thought it did look like she loosened up a bit. "... Well have fun with your girlfriend Haruki-senpai." he says before glancing back at Kenji.

@Inertia you could probably just take out the last little part;

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And it would probably make sense.

It's alright, just confused me a bit that's all. :)

And I feel kinda guilty as I seem to be the one to point out things like that.

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It's alright, point out where I fuck up haha, better to know I guess.

@Inertia I believe all the ones with multiple people have different text colors for each character

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True, but what i mean is that sudden transition just screws with my reading I guess haha.

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For my characters, I try to transition them via transition sentences at their locations. Yay grammar.

Well I got a post up, and Silver, don't worry about it too much, I think I have the gist of it.
Uhm, also, people with two or more characters being controlled would you mind uh, putting a line or the like?
I mean so it's easier for an idiot like me to distinguish the character you're using, haha?

Thanks if you can!

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Also I was browsing through the characters tab and at the bottom of TheWindel's there is a hider with three question marks and a creepy looking girl inside, red eyes, holding a knife………………

Need I say more…?