[@BCTheEntity]
I like your character up until mid-biography, EVEN THOUGH YOU DIDN'T KEEP MY FORMATTING!!!!1!(y u no like mah formatting?! i work so hard on it ;^; ). 

The biggest problem I have with your character is that he's overpowered to the point of not being cannon to this setting. Having control over any type of magic "to the point that he could utilize* them in a great variety of ways, not limited to only specific forms of attack with any given element" in this world takes centuries to achieve. At that point in his life, your character would just know a crap-ton of spells. Which, would in theory be fine as long as they were spelled (LOL PUN NOT INTENDED BUT RECOGNIZED) out in your CS. [s](TBH, did you really think you could buy complete element control with 1 SP?)[/s]

But I wouldn't want your character to be that powerful. An important part of a roleplay, to me, is character development. The point of the skill points is to limit people over powering their character. 

There are other semantics issues with your CS, but because I'm so vague in the CS, and others have had questions concerning that, its probably more my fault. 

@Anyone
I'm going to do some edits to the OP and CS this evening, now that I'm home, so keep that in mind, please! Hopefully it'll clear some things up.