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Lol, maybe not quite so RWBY.  =P  But basically RWBY, but a little less fluid and with more mistakes, if that makes sense.
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Twas interesting.  :sun.  But, perhaps find a way to break it into more then one giant paragraph.  You don't have to go back and change it or anything, just keep it in mind for the next one.
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No worries, the muse was with me and I focused on explaining everything :cool