[hider=Character] [center][b]Cregan Hart[/b] [i]"Honor and Loyalty are stronger than steel, and mine will not break"[/i][/center] [center][img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/294/3/f/dark_fantasy_character_design_by_d_torres-d6rdipl.jpg[/img][/center] [b]Full name:[/b] Cregan Hart [b]Titles:[/b] Ser, “Weade's wolf” [b]Social rank:[/b] Knight [b]Job or societal position:[/b] Assigned to guard Joakim Weade [b]Age:[/b] 25 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] See picture above. Height: 6'2” Weight: 164 lbs Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Blue [b]Personality:[/b] Cregan can often come across as gruff or rude, but he has no cruelty in his heart. He easily loses his temper when he perceives something as a slight against his lords, which is due to his complete loyalty to the Weades. History: Cregan was born into a family that had served the Weades for generations as bannermen, but as the fourthborn son he had almost no chance to inherit. Almost as soon as he was old enough he became squire for Lord Rikard Weade, his age resulting in a fast friendship with Rikards son, Gregar. As he grew from a boy into a young man it became clear he was an exceptionally talented warrior, and Rikard began putting more effort into Cregan's martial education than would often be considered reasonable for a squire. Cregan excelled at his swordwork, though he was never one to lead troops, and always looked up to Gregar, being loyal to a fault. By the time he was granted a knighthood he was already something of a renowned warrior in Borhilon, bringing pride both to his own family and the Weades who he adored. When Rikard and Gregar left for war Cregan begged Rikard to take him with them, but Rikard insisted Cregan stay to protect the Wintershouse. [b]Skills:[/b] Exceptional combatant with most weapons, both in battlefield and dueling scenarios. [b]Dreams and fears:[/b] Cregan aspires to be the greatest knight in the Whitelands, or perhaps even Borhilon as a whole. His fear is to fail in his duties to protect the Weades. [b]Favored equipment:[/b] Cregan wields a large two handed sword in battle, though he also carries a shield and axe for when he needs to fight more defensively. See image for armor. [b]Extra:[/b] Sigil is a white wolf with antlers, the sigil of his family. [/hider] Tell me how this looks and if there's anything I need to change/expand upon.