[quote=@Rae Zer] [hider=Vincent] [center][b]Vincent White[/b][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/puDzshs.jpg?1[/img][/center] [center][i][/i][/center] [b]Full Name:[/b] Vincent Tigas White [b]Titles:[/b] Bastard, Fatherless, Whoreson [b]Social Rank:[/b] Bastard [b]Job or Societal Position:[/b] As a Bastard child, Vincent has no real position in society and is often publicly shunned by basically anybody. But, Vincent has taken up a recent apprenticeship with the forge master in Wintershouse. Vincent has been an apprentice smith for nearly three months before Lord Rikard died. Nobody truly knows who Vincent's parents were other than the late Lord Rikard and his son Gregar. [b]Age:[/b] 18 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Apperance:[/b] Refer to the Above Picture [indent] [b]Height:[/b] 6'3" [b]Weight:[/b] 212lbs [b]Hair Color:[/b][color=#2B1600]Dark Brown[/color] [b]Eye Color:[/b] [color=0072bc]Blue[/color] [b]Notable Body Features:[/b] Vincent has a scar on the upper left side of his torso from a burn that is in the shape of a circle with a line cutting it vertically in half.[/indent] [b]Personality:[/b] Vincent's personality is most definently a product of his raising. As a Bastard child of no known origin, Vincent was shunned almost like one would shun a leper or man who produced a child out of wedlock. Parents would guide their children away from Vincent and Vincent eventually came to accept that there was no way he could ever live a normal life. Most of the time Vincent will outright avoid being near people. Sometimes he unconsciously blocks people out who are just trying to be friendly to him. If one could work their way through Vincent's shell, they would find that he is really a nice person that not a man of many words. [b]History:[/b] Vincent grew up without a Mother nor Father, an outcast from normal society. Raised as a Ward of the Weades, Vincent was taught to read, write, and adress people of higher status than him. He was not allowed to mingle with any of the Weades and was only kept with what few wards there were in Wintershouse. Vincent's place in society became painfully obvious as he grew older and he became more observent. He was quick to realize that the glares cast at him were not because of hatred but because of disgust. Everybody looked at him with disgust because he was a Bastard child who had no known mother or father. But Vincent's life was not without its own happiness for he had friends. The single friend who treated Vincent the best was the forge master in Wintershouse, Jerald. Their friendship began early in Vincent's life when he ran into the forge crying after several of the guard recruits bullied him for being a bastard. Jerald offered Vincent a rag to dry his eyes on after a few minutes. It was one of the few acts of kindness Vincent has experienced in his life. From then on, Vincent would sit and watch Jerald for items varying from new horse shoes and nails to sword guards and chain mail repairs. Jerald was happy for Vincent's presence for, though Jerald had two other apprentinces, Vincent was most like his then deceased son. It was Jerald who took care of Vincent after a drunk guard recruit took a burning hot brand to Vincent after Vincent walked away from the guard. Jerald had found Vincent on the ground with the burn of a brand on his chest and took him to the infirmary where Jerald payed for Vincent's care. [b]Skills:[/b] Vincent is by far one of Jerald's most skilled apprentices and was quick to learn the basics of smithing in his first three months of apprenticeship. He is also quite quick to learn and a rather good reader despite how little actual schooling he has in reading. Vincent fancies himself a swordsman but has no training beyond knowing how to hold a sword. [b]Dreams and Fears:[/b] Vincent dreams for a day when he is know for his prowess as a smith rather than the fact that he was a Fatherless and Motherless bastard child. He fears failing and disappointing Jerald, the one person who has put his trust in Vincent. [b]Favored Equipment:[/b] Vincent doesn't really have anything he can call his own. His clothing were loaned to him by Jerald as well as his smithing equipment. The only thing that is actually Vincent's is a banded iron ring he forged on his second month of apprenticeship. [b]Extra:[/b][url=http://www.tiplopworks.com/uploaded_files/products/nordic_ring28VBK.jpg]Vincent's Iron ring[/url] [/hider] For your review Partisan. [/quote] This looks good. Feel free to put it in the character bin. [quote=@Murtox] Hey here my character [hider=Eadbalding] [b]Full name:[/b] [i]Eadbalding Hulthart[/i] [b]Titles:[/b] [i]Earl [/i] [b]Social rank:[/b] [i]Nobleman[/i] [b]Job or societal position:[/b] He walks in his castle , read , supervise the work in the county, bureaucratic stuff [b]Age:[/b] 21 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [hider=Appearance] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/6f/c1/38/6fc1388fcb41e8cfbc1d08c428ec61bc.jpg[/img] [/hider] [b]Personality:[/b]Meticulous,Perfectionist,Inspiring,Intelligent,Ambitious,Noble but do anything for get what he wants [b]History:[/b] Being born in the familiy of Hulthart , owners of a village in the Forklands called Jaktland , they dont give tribute to the Rossric family instead to the king himself , this was earned through years of hard work and recognition of the king.Because of this they dont have a good relationship with the Rossric.His father had 78 years old and his mother 40 , because of this he was the only son of his father and by right heir of owner of Jaktland , his father just died this year when Eadbalding had 21 years now being owner of Jaktland have to deal with the Rossric and their ambitions. Jaktland is a land of honest people and almost no crimes , Eadbalding specializes in math and leadership , when he was young his father teach him about the economic and how to make the people work efficiently , his parents was with him in various occasions this make him very near to his parents they were a stable family , they also teached him about their dinasty and how they became free from the Rossric , that made Eadbalding apreciate a lot the freedom they gathered and he will protect it at all cost. Skills:Leadership and Bureaucrat Dreams and fears: Wants to make Jaktland a center of commerce but fears the Rossric taking back Jaktland Favored equipment: A Staff , Book and Dagger Extra: [hider=Coat of Arms] [img]https://noticeclubpenguin.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/327px-arendelle_banner_icon.png[/img] [/hider] [/hider] [/quote] It's a bit too short, and the personality needs to be expanded heavily if I'm going to be willing to give this one a shot.