[@Fox] The sheet is decently written, but I have a few notes: - He seems a bit too... perfect for my tastes. Not saying he's a Gary Sue. He's tall, good looking, no physical flaws whatsoever, has above average intelligence, little personality flaws or demons, plays a lot of sports, knows martial arts (What kind? There's plenty and saying "Advanced Martial Arts" training ain't gonna cut it for me) and parkour. - But the main problem I see is that he doesn't have too much interactivity, imo. - Some of his skills and interests don't add up with the backstory section. When and where did he learn parkour/martial arts? Or when did he play so many physical activities? - His backstory cuts off... How did he get to the Academy, and why? - The power section could use more detail, I want at least a paragraph describing everything it can do, and how it functions. Going off what you written for the limits, there is more you can write. - Why did you put the Limits and Weaknesses together? They're separate for a reason. Either way, I want some actual weaknesses to cloning. - Urban also mentioned that, since he's trained in so many areas, something has to give.