[quote=@Murtox]
Here my character idk if he is too over powered if he is please tell me
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[b]Name:[/b] Latinost

[b]Age:[/b] 15

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Appearance:[/b] 1.70 meters of height , 120 kg of weight because of his skin , brown skin with black hair and a Tail of 1 meter.
[b]Hybrid Animal:[/b]Komodo dragon 50%

[b]Abilities:[/b]
[b]-Improved skin:[/b] he is harder because of the combination of reptile skin and delicated mutations , this can stop a assault rifle and a shot of 50.Caliber gun if he can posionate good enought
[b]-Teeth of Depredator:[/b]he have a teeth which can open very largue wounds and tear his enemy
[b]-Venom of Komodo:[/b]He can put a venom into his victim wounds which in some time can paralize it
[b]-Tail of Muscle:[/b]He have a tail which he can use to fight which is strong

[b]History:[/b] Latinost was a baby born in Mexico brought to USA ilegally because of this he was easily brought to the laboratories without arousing much suspicion and was easily modificated because of his early age , when he leaved the laboratory he moved to a "Barrio" of latinos he joined a orphanate and got some education , recently he got a Tail which was unexpected for him , he get again into the laboratory and didnt give any resistence because he wanted to know more about his abilities.
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I don't think he's really to overpowered! I am slightly worried about the grammar though, it's a little hard to understand. Can you maybe go back through and try to fix it?