[@Guess Who]

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I'm a bit confused on what his powers do. Does he change elements between their solid, liquid, gas, and plasma states? 
 ([color=turquoise] Alright I tried explaining it better, but if it's still bad then basically it is being able to control all the elements no matter what their form is.[/color])

Also, can't help but notice that you called him Damien a few times.
 ([color=turquoise] This is why I never have characters with the same letter that starts their name O^O[/color])

 Besides that, and some grammar and spelling mistakes, you look good.
 ([color=turquoise] Sorry, I suck with grammar(them commas doe -.-) and the spelling mistakes I should of fix...(hopefully) ^,^[/color])
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