[quote=@McHaggis] Yes ^^ I can colour the ones he hears from other people in red which was the original plan, if you'd like, but the confusion of not knowing who they were from was sorta intentional. [/quote] Oh no I wasn't confused on who they were from, not at all really. I was confused as to whether or not they were meant to be thoughts, since thoughts are generally in first person. Does your character intentionally think in third person?