Wow, a very well developed concept!  I can see you migrated some of the nice sections from the other roleplay into your sheet.  I ended up doing a more standard sheet out of habit, but it might be worth it to include the 'greatest love' and 'motivation' section in the character sheet and then strongarm all the poor souls who've already made theirs into editing it in.  Hm...

In terms of actual feedback, the sole concern might be that your character is slightly overpowered.  His magic is quite potent and pretty versatile, it seems.  While I'm not averse to having one character that's the strongest, weaknesses are an important part of any character.  Could you summarize Riad's?

Oh, out of curiosity, what sort of reptile is our parili friend?