[quote=@SillyGoy] Would Lady Vehrna be interested in some snake oil? No, not to drink, but to smear across one's body. It is quite good for one's skin, for it can stabilize the outer humours and make radiant one's complexion. However, the application requires a delicate, precise massage at key pressure points on the body, and can thus be delivered only by a trained professional. Like Variel. It's only three copper pennies for radiant skin and a massage. "A good trade," says the doctor. [/quote] That's lewd. I'm reporting you to the GM for lewdness. [quote=@Tatsua Aiisen] [@SillyGoy] Looks good. I have nothing in particular to comment about on this one, it's nice and concise, and fits with the world's lore well enough. Temporarily accepted [i](with the full acceptance or denial coming when the roleplay starts)[/i]. [@Freeshooter92] I like the character, a nice, well-made female knight that is consistent with most lore and rules. The only thing I must point out is that, currency in Mortis is most heavily based on the use of Silver coinage, and while Gold coins are a thing, they're far too high value to be passed around casually. Basically, they're pretty much reserved for Nobles, Government Officials, people who make large purchases. All of that said, a sum of money such as the one described in your post isn't unfeasible, but I feel like this would surprise your character quite a bit more than you implied. Basically, no matter who these gold coins came from, the fact that there were gold coins to begin with would just scream "This is no joke." So, in this sense, the gold coins could be considered "Proof that your job is important". Which is why, even though I would say the casual usage of this is wrong, I'm totally cool with it. Sorry for the long-winded explanation, but you're temporarily accepted! Love the character, and I'm looking forward to how things go with the crazy danger approaching around the corner~! [/quote] Alrighty, slightly edited the end of her history to account for this new information! I also added a deck of playing cards to her equipment, and adjusted the description on her coins somewhat.