[@RPGSlime] Well, I have to say that he's somewhat interesting. I do like his bavkstory and power. Just a... few things I have to note. - When coding the sheet, you're supposed to put the information in [i]between[/i] the infdent tags. That's how it gets indented. lol - What kind of gold we talking about here? Pure or mixed? Because, pure gold is soft. If he made a knife and tried to stab someone, it wouldn't do too good. Same with armor. Though, you could say it's magically mixed with other metals when he does his thing. - Gold is also pretty heavy. You could add that as a weakness or something. But that scene where Nicholas threw the golden grass wouldn't work unless the NEST agents were pretty close. Or he was pretty strong. - The kickboxing feels a little tacked on. Sorry, but most people on this site use martial arts as a "I know martial arts, that means I win all fights!" - It also feels a little weird that they'd send him to the Academy [i]before[/i] he gets powers. Thooooough... I get a feeling you're going somewhere with this.