[quote=@mdk]
We could talk some technique on the fight scene if you want, but that's nitty-gritty and I'll save it for now -- but if you wanna have a conversation let me know, here or in PM, I have general thoughts on your approach.
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Alright, I wouldn't mind.

And yeah, I wrote the story... Probably should have mentioned that in the PM, but meh, next entry.