And there you have it. A few posts up I have edited one post and included my reviews! As to some of the reviews given, I'll address them here.

[@RomanAria] Wow. I wasn't expecting a perfect score or anything like that. Thank you so much for the glowing review. It's nice to know that someone likes my work so much or that I got you to cry. I write for me and to draw out emotions from other people so hearing about a reaction like that makes me very happy. You're far too kind, haha. I did put a lot of thought into reactions and how things would play out. I only wish I had a bit more time I could put into the actual death scene that I was able to put into the character relationships from the beginning. But again, thank you so much!

[@PlatinumSkink] Lol, well. At least you really enjoyed the beginning aspect of the work. I probably had the most fun working on the interactions between Kaelyn, Landon, and Terra. Kaelyn is definitely a favorite character of mine. Sassy, sarcastic, trouble-making teen with a troubled past who grew up to start trusting people again. The early writing of her was definitely a bit melodramatic, but at the heart of her character I just loved the way she interacted with others. 

As for the death scene. I don't necessarily disagree with you. Scripted, maybe. I didn't feel like I got the death scene down as much as I wanted to. But I did give a lot of thought to how she would react and I don't know. I felt that went down mostly the way I wanted it to. Death being random and unfair at times. Definitely some details I wanted to include in the ending. I also have problems with death scenes. I try to find the perfect balance between dialogue and description because I feel like too much dialogue doesn't come off as genuine and real to me. One day I shall succeed in the balance!

The change of the essay length was on purpose. Was trying to balance out description and "less is more". On top of that, I was also running out of time. Not for the time to hand in the entry, but I was also heading to a party that night so I had to finish that more quick than I wanted to. That might explain certain things. Anyway, that's what I've got to say on that.