I read through it on the character tab and I actually do like it a lot. There is a bit of drama/trauma in every super's history. The brotherly bond is really close despite all of the things they went through (divorce, being seperated and reunited again). Also you still left a few loose ends as to what exactly happened to his parents. Sometimes it's rewarding to be vague because it allows you to add things in the future. His father if he survived could make an appearance. Ideas, you can ignore them if you want to XD