[quote=@Chenzor]
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You are absolutely right. Each faction thinks they should govern the other and each faction has different ways of thinking. I'll enjoy roleplaying it.
I will include what brings them together when I finish up the sheet. 
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  Maybe find a way to integrate your RP more with other players. It's fine to have in-faction conflict but balance it with interacting with other factions/NPCs etc. NS looks great so far

[@arenasnow]NS looks good. I might have more notes for you later today.

 [@Elitestpotato]  NS is a good start. Just write more! Tell me(and the other players) who the FBM is, more details on Scythe and Donaldson, your factions weapons, bases. etc. The Elysium Defense Contract would have the FBM on its wanted list with all those secret bases around Elysium City-