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Will do a post today after work...
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@RakuraiI'm gonna stay, though, like I've said time for me is a luxury more than anything else, having to work and attend college and all, I really like the way things are going. That said, if there's no further notice I'll be doing an IC post sometime in the next 24 hours.
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I'm still here.

Just figuring out what I want to post while wrapping up English homework.
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No worries. I'm still in. I'll get a post ready sometime tomorrow or so.
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Now that I think about it, there's not much that Kotori can do at this moment in the story, since the scene barely developed from when I last posted. I'll wait a little more before posting again.

@Rakurai You should just roll with the punches, I for once liked the way things developed until now, but until we undo the little knot that has been formed around Zeke we can't move forward. It's all up to you, now.
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Haha, I'll get around to that in a bit, wanted to let Cheese get in a post before I did anything.
Actually have an assignment due this Friday that I've barely touched so I'm not exactly in a hurry to get things moving anyway.

As for Zeke the issue with him isn't supposed to be resolved in the immediate future.
But I've got that worked out... maybe xD

I know a few people are being held up, but I also know a few people have had things change around them and haven't been able to keep up, so about conflicted on whether I should post or not. But eh, maybe after a nap xD
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Well, I'm in a hurry to post, exactly. As long as you don't care for doing nothing at all IC until concerning Kotori happens (or I get too bored of waiting), I'm fine.

It's just a matter of you knowing that I haven't dropped the RP.
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Well, I'm in a hurry to post, exactly. As long as you don't care for doing nothing at all IC until concerning Kotori happens (or I get too bored of waiting), I'm fine.

It's just a matter of you knowing that I haven't dropped the RP.


Kotori could talk to Brooklyn about random stuff or something.
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@CrimmyBut about what?
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Anything really.
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I'm sorry. Something suddenly came up so I don't really know when I'll be able to post again. I'll try to post tonight if I got the time. >_>
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@Crimmy
I think I can't hold back my opinion about this anymore, even more so after your more recent comment for Kotori to initiate the conversation with Brooklyn.
The way you are currently going (yes, I can see you have only just made a few posts) your character is going to end up in the shadows, ether forgotten or players are just going to find it bothersome to go out of their way to interact with Brooklyn since that is what they are going always going to need to do.
First off, you can play a introverted character without just sitting there and hoping for the next person to say something so you can be a part of the roleplay. I have seen introverted/silent type character roleplayed well and interesting without getting others to feel like they have to drag the character along to be nice, and so they don't feel left out.
I just don´t think it is fair to KoL the way you have started things here in the OOC, you are sort of putting things into their hand if your character is going to get any roleplay, instead of just initiating it yourself. If KoL hadn't been nice enough to go fetch you by the looks of it, Brooklyn would have been left in the forest since she seemed too 'lazy' to move.
It's not very, how do I say, flowy. Wooosh. Super woooooosh. That type of thing.

Though, while I am at it, I think I should also just continue to comment on the things I have noticed.

@Onarax
Ether write at the start who it is from, or switch to third person perspective.
Though that has already been noted, I thought I would state it.

I don't agree you are more limited when writing in third person, and that first person is any better or "go tight on the character's perspective".

@Bleu Chess
Cheeese! My man, my man~
The only thing I can say is lack of posting, and you have already excused yourself. The life of the meat-suit comes first after all. Actually, not to sound like I have favorites, or anything like that... You are actually the one who has impressed me the most when it comes to both writing, and bringing your character across in a really comedic-interesting way.

@KoL and @karamonnom
You two, I can't say anything else other then I love the characters :) They are fun to play with, as well as I like how you two have stuck to a personality trait.

@TrixyTrix
So far I have only seen two post, but I loved the fact that she enjoyed seeing Ian fear her, and I loved how you played with that as well. Look forward to seeing more.

@Rakurai
Pffffft... Don't need to say anything here xD You know what I think~
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Thank you so much <3 Your compliments make me happy~ haha I'll try my best to keep it up! Emilie is a fun character to play as well~~
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Haha xD You are cute~
There is no need to thank me, I look forward to seeing more of Emilie.
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@MelodyNoir Thank you for your compliment, I make@karamonnom's words about liking to play her character mine.

The only reason I haven't posted anything IC again is because I believe that, based on the number of posts made until now, Kotori still hadn't the time get back from where she went to get Brook and join the other current scene, but if any of you things the contrary (my sense of time isn't that good to be true) I can remedy that easily.

Edit:

Seems I haven't seen Rakurai's before doing this one, gotta go read it ASAP.
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Brook ain't introverted.

I admit that my roleplaying's been passive so far, and I'll try and get stuff going a bit more as I continue posting, but honestly, I really just roleplay my characters the way I imagine them. Brooklyn's a lazy person. She's in a weird world, sure, but what was there, beyond an OOC motivation to get everyone together, for her to seek people out? It was in-character for her to like the tree, so she decided to rest against it.

Get her brain together and all that.

Relax and stuff.

Doesn't really lead in well to interaction, true, but I need to establish my characters first. Get into their brains. How do they work?
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I finished reading @Rakurai's post, Zeke seems a tad too paranoid to me, I should say. Anyway, I have a good idea of what to do now, I'll post as soon as I can, tomorrow.
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Ok, people, I finally could do my, and actually took a reasonable action to break the stalemate that has been created. I guess that this is probably the most that Kotori can muster even with her all levelheadedness, if people don't listen to reason now, we are all bound to die.
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Brook ain't introverted.

I admit that my roleplaying's been passive so far, and I'll try and get stuff going a bit more as I continue posting, but honestly, I really just roleplay my characters the way I imagine them. Brooklyn's a lazy person. She's in a weird world, sure, but what was there, beyond an OOC motivation to get everyone together, for her to seek people out? It was in-character for her to like the tree, so she decided to rest against it.

Get her brain together and all that.

Relax and stuff.

Doesn't really lead in well to interaction, true, but I need to establish my characters first. Get into their brains. How do they work?


From what I can see, you seem too thick headed to actually listen to anything constructive anyone has to say.
Relax and stuff? Really? I know I might not have sugar coated my words and been all teeth rotting cute when I wrote what I thought, but I am sticking to it and I am and was, pretty darn relaxed.
I just can't see how you can argue that Brooklyn is not introverted, after every single one of your posts. Okey, maybe using the word introvert was a poor choice of mine. Lazy player and a lazy character.
Like I said earlier, I am fully aware that these are just your first few points. But, I do roleplays like I do things in real life. First impressions are pretty much everything. And sadly my first impression of you as a capable roleplayer has done nothing but drop, and my first impression of you was already poor to start with.
But yes! Have fun getting into their brains while hugging trees~ Just don't expect people to try to drag you along to everything in the long run. I didn't say anything earlier to try to be mean, or anything like that, but more as a warning really. The way you are going about things only will lead to people ending up wanting to be nice, going out of their way to go pick up Brooklyn, with the payment of their own enjoyment of the roleplay.
Since I got the shiny banner Co-GM Powers, ACTIVATE! I do feel like I need to actually state something now, before it is actually too late.

@KoL
On that note xD Your latest post got me to laugh a bit :P I am going to see about writing up a post before I head off to bed. If not, then I'll do it sometime early tomorrow :)
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Well I don't remember doing anything that funny, but if you liked it you're more than welcome. Thanks.@MelodyNoir
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