[@Thrashy]

NS - looks good so far. I like the Gaelic feel to it, reminds me of home.

[@eemmtt]

A bit more description of industry and military would be appreciated, but other than that, looks good.

Some points to think about:
What do you import?
What do you export?
How's the economy? Are there lots of unemployed or does everyone have a job?
What do you make?
Anything you are famous for?

Anything else of note about the army? Does it use levies, is there a standing army, are woman accepted?
Age limits - how old does one have to be to join the army? Is this different for different races

[@Nerevarine]

Very Asiatic. Has the potential to be an interesting nation when the NS is finished