[quote=@Voltus_Ventus]
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Would you like me to change it? It would be no trouble.
[/quote]

I guess best would be to change the first bit a little, that he barely slept after waking carver and going to bed.
Maybe something about him thinking he's dreaming awake because he swore he saw a little boy lie next to Carver.