[@OneEyedChurro] I like Dal's personality, very down to earth. Not much else to be said about that. Background was likewise very detailed, and I like the idea of 'Cribbich' being a enjoyed passtime by Edessan youth. While I have never heard of boxing rinks in taverns, nor do I believe boxing was truly around during such a time- maybe sparring due to lack of padded gloves, but I'll let them slide as they provide good reason, motivation, and skills. Don't forget to include in your backstory that he is being sent away from his family and home on a caravan to the north- not just moved into the city. Skills seem well balanced. Huh, and speaking of, I forgot to put down shield use for my own character. Stalwart is more of a trait than it is a skill, and isn't as necessary to put down, as it should be implied through your posts as well as his general background and skills. Equipment seems fine to me. Where did he obtain his saber though? It doesn't sound like something a farmhand would have easy access to. Was it his fathers/family, or did he buy it? And was his uncle really okay with him taking his armor when they moved out?