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Five hundred years ago, Earthrealm was first threatened by the forces of Outworld. Outworld's ruler, the tyrannical Emperor Shao Kahn, expanded his empire by conquering countless realms and merging them with his own. Earthrealm had become the Emperor's next target, and we were hopelessly outmatched. With the balance of power so overwhelmingly in favor of Outworld, the Elder Gods intervened in order to give us a fighting chance...and the Mortal Kombat Tournament was born. This Tournament, held once every generation, pits Outworld's mightiest warriors against the chosen defenders of Earthrealm. Only be securing ten straight victories in Mortal Kombat can Outworld absorb our realm.

After nine consecutive losses to Outworld, Earthrealm’s back was against the wall. For half a millennium, the Tournament had been dominated by Outworld’s Champion, Prince Goro, who won the inaugural Tournament by brutally murdering the Great Kung Lao. Earthrealm’s last hope was Liu Kang, a descendant of the Great Kung Lao, seeking to avenge his ancestor’s death at Goro’s hands. Liu Kang slayed Goro, and defeated the evil sorcerer Shang Tsung to become the new Champion of Mortal Kombat. Earthrealm was saved...or so it seemed.

Enraged by Liu Kang’s victory, and the prospect of having to wait another five hundred years to seize Earthrealm, Shao Kahn defied the Elder Gods by sending his armies across the border between realms, launching an invasion of Earthrealm in spite of Outworld’s loss in Mortal Kombat. However, while Shao Kahn’s minions were able to attack Earthrealm, the Emperor himself was unable to cross the threshold. His devious advisor, Shang Tsung, hatched a plan to turn the tables in favor of Outworld once more.

Shang Tsung went to Earthrealm and abducted Sonya Blade, one of the brave heroes that had fought against Outworld in the Mortal Kombat Tournament. With Sonya held hostage, and Shao Kahn’s armies laying waste to innocents, I was forced to agree to Shang Tsung’s terms for a new Tournament, a Tournament to be held in Outworld. If we are defeated, Outworld will absorb Earthrealm and we shall be enslaved by Shao Kahn. But if Earthrealm is victorious, Shao Kahn will abandon his claim to it forever and his armies will never again be allowed to enter our world.

I am Raiden, God of Thunder and Protector of Earthrealm, and the agents of darkness have forced my hand. Once again, Earthrealm’s heroes must do battle for the fate of our world. Once again, we must fight...in MORTAL KOMBAT!



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No anime/maga pictures though.


Hum, annoying. Was going to use something I'd drawn up, but now I need to figure out a new idea. Hum, this might take a bit I guess.
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<Snipped quote by ZeusTheMoose>

Hum, annoying. Was going to use something I'd drawn up, but now I need to figure out a new idea. Hum, this might take a bit I guess.


Honestly it's not that big a deal. If you already went through the trouble of drawing something up go ahead and use it.
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@ZeusTheMooseEh, looking back on it the design doesn't really mesh well with MK anyways, so I'll see if I can figure something else out. Thanks anyway.
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<Snipped quote by Rin>

Honestly it's not that big a deal. If you already went through the trouble of drawing something up go ahead and use it.


What if your character is drawn in such a style? But of course not belonging to an anime? As in "This is sorta the art style we have to work with." Is that acceptable?
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Eh, looking back on it the design doesn't really mesh well with MK anyways, so I'll see if I can figure something else out. Thanks anyway.


This is the most important point. The character design has to mesh with the MK universe. If it's drawn in an anime style I suppose it still could, but I just think that typically that kind of art wouldn't fit in. That was really the only point I was trying to make. I guess we'll just have to take it on a case by case basis.

Feel free to send me character concepts or ideas if you're unsure or you just want some input and I'll have a look.
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@ZeusTheMooseI'll send you a PM of some ideas before I even bother to begin, if that is alright.
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Interested, might get app up tonight

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I am going to put my CS in a few minutes but I wanted to say something to the OP about the plot.

In my opinion (and just my opinion, maybe you ALL want something different), the Outworld should be winning this tournament by a landslide. And let me explain what I mean. In order to make a nice and fluid MK RP we could go ahead and follow the actual storyline: have Shao Kahn defeated by the Earthrealm defenders and follow to 3. BUT, what if we twist the plot and have the invasion begin with our defenders weakened by their lose at the Outworld? Maybe this brings new alliances since Shao Kahn will surely step in to claim the Earthrealm, using EVERY method possible to convince his allies (Reptile with Zaterra, for example) to help him. With this, some good guys can even turn bad and vice-versa. We will have a good plot because it will be a new one and we can always discuss where to take it. After all, we are re-writing MK's plot and giving Shao Kahn a bit of advantage, after all...he is definitely stronger in the Outworld.
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I am going to put my CS in a few minutes but I wanted to say something to the OP about the plot.

In my opinion (and just my opinion, maybe you ALL want something different), the Outworld should be winning this tournament by a landslide. And let me explain what I mean. In order to make a nice and fluid MK RP we could go ahead and follow the actual storyline: have Shao Kahn defeated by the Earthrealm defenders and follow to 3. BUT, what if we twist the plot and have the invasion begin with our defenders weakened by their lose at the Outworld? Maybe this brings new alliances since Shao Kahn will surely step in to claim the Earthrealm, using EVERY method possible to convince his allies (Reptile with Zaterra, for example) to help him. With this, some good guys can even turn bad and vice-versa. We will have a good plot because it will be a new one and we can always discuss where to take it. After all, we are re-writing MK's plot and giving Shao Kahn a bit of advantage, after all...he is definitely stronger in the Outworld.


I literally pitched this exact plot in the Interest Check thread. Outworld wins.
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Ahhhhhhh yeah! Can I be Kung Lao? Always loved playing as this guy.
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Zeus, I sent you a PM.
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Great then. Outworld shall reign supreme.

And holy shit, I fell asleep and forgot to write the CS. I'll write it when I return home this evening.
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@Mortimer I have those moments too XD
Like, I just need to know if an idea of mine for my character is approved before I even do the CS, and my artist is working on something for this.
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Ahhhhhhh yeah! Can I be Kung Lao? Always loved playing as this guy.
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Yeah for sure, Kung Lao is one of my favorites to play as too. In MK9 he definitely had the best Fatality (Quan Chi was a very close second).
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Here is my character, hope he is acceptable

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@Nerevarine

I have gripes with this character already.

- Like, I'm cool with a Roman styled character, I think that totally fits in Mortal Kombat.
But... He has too many things at his disposal. It would be different if it was like MK X where you had three different variations to a specific strength, but it is more like MK 9 where it is just one specific variation.

- You have 2 Roman styles, 3 weapons, a tower shield (Which is really heavy by the way.) Grappling (which does not but me at all really.) and Boxing...?

- One is the Tower Shield move, the name just makes no sense... Where did he learn the water technique anyways? Is he earthborn?

- The weapons are going to weigh you down if you have 3 of them.

- If you very Roman like, why do you have boxing integrated into your fighting style?

- Too much utility and not enough risk. You seem too much like a Boss Character that has EVERY GROUND EVER COVERED.

Maybe I'm just being skeptical, but he seems like he needs to be toned down.
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Boxing and wrestling are some of the oldest martial arts in the world and were practiced first by greeks and then romans. Pankration, the fusion of both with an added variety of techniques such as kicking, choking and joint locks, is perhaps the first ever no-limits barehanded fighting contest and was strikingly similar to modern mixed martial arts. It was an event in the Olympics and the romans also had their own contests until they were abolished along with all pagan festivals by a christian emperor whose name escapes me.

No real argument against all your other problems, just saying that having boxing and wrestling is quite accurate. Well, you might say that having a shield, a spear, a net and a short sword is being several types of gladiators at once, whereas they were usually split amongst types very strictly. A guy with a spear and net had just that, a guy with a sword might've had just that or a sword and a small shield, it was all about "character types", so to speak, done for show rather than combat in real life.

Also, interested.
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Boxing and wrestling are some of the oldest martial arts in the world and were practiced first by greeks and then romans. Pankration, the fusion of both with an added variety of techniques such as kicking, choking and joint locks, is perhaps the first ever no-limits barehanded fighting contest and was strikingly similar to modern mixed martial arts. It was an event in the Olympics and the romans also had their own contests until they were abolished along with all pagan festivals by a christian emperor whose name escapes me.

No real argument against all your other problems, just saying that having boxing and wrestling is quite accurate. Well, you might say that having a shield, a spear, a net and a short sword is being several types of gladiators at once, whereas they were usually split amongst types very strictly. A guy with a spear and net had just that, a guy with a sword might've had just that or a sword and a small shield, it was all about "character types", so to speak, done for show rather than combat in real life.

Also, interested.


Aside from the history thing, even so he has way too much versatility with all the weapons. And it is still around 4 fighting styles. I'd have less problems if he wasn't as "agile" (And the water thing is kind of pretty much just Aqua man. Like, you how these projectiles, what do you need water for?). Like, this sort of character seems like it would be centered around Risk vs reward. But there is little risk with all this stuff. It just leaves a bad taste in my mouth for someone who has been playing MK for years. I look at this and just see Shoa Kahn...
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@Nerevarine

I really like the concept of the character. Having a gladiator fighting in Mortal Kombat makes sense. I also liked how you incorporated the whole "thumbs down" execution thing into his finishing move. The water powers seemed a little random and unnecessary though. Just stay focused on the gladiator angle, with the different weapons and whatnot at his disposal because I think that's a cool idea. I probably would've called him Klaudius though, but that's just me. I also wonder if he has to be from Earthrealm. If he was from Outworld he could have the typical gladiator backstory, being a slave that fought to the death in some kind of arena there. Just a suggestion, I don't have an issue with the current backstory it was just an idea that popped into my head. Maybe he was a slave to Shao Kahn that won his freedom by fighting in the Coliseum. Now he wants to kick Shao Kahn's ass so he fights for the good guys.

Also, I made some slight tweaks to the default kharacter sheet in the OP, jsut so everyone knwos. I added a section for Homeworld and I suggested that you give your fatality a fancy name. Like "Toasty".
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