[quote=Caits] Mortim! My god! And did it kinda have to sound like to kill a mocking bird in parts lol [/quote] I've never read the book.... How did it though? Just honest curiosity since I'm curious about how people see my writing style. :D Yeah I know its super long though, I shortened it actually xD It would have been much longer but I decided for the evil creature not to have minions, and for me not to go into too much detail about the monster. I also waited to describe my character in more detail since I want other characters to see him before I get into certain details.