[@Inertia] - Much better! Now he seems more like his own character. Though a couple things should be fixed first - the legend. Shouldn't it reflect his more swordsman nature now instead of arrows? I mean, if you'd rather leave it like that, it's fine.

Second in his back story, it still mentions that surpassed everyone in archery, when it's not even a mentioned skill anymore. Probably fix that so everything matches. ^.^

[@Earnest Evans] - Hm... honestly, it doesn't seem like the character has much sustenance. Besides the fact that you didn't mention [i]anything[/i] about a romance or having children in his back story (but you did in his flaws?), why would a father of three children ever think of possibly risking his life on adventures?