[@SimplyJohn] There are a good number of powers, but it does seem you’ve managed to balance it out nonetheless. Good. You should add some relations with other player characters. That’s the primary purpose of the relations field. -------------------------------- [@MonkeyBusiness] At 16, with 13 years of training, she will be fairly experienced with using the force, even if she’s far from mastering anything. This is in reference to the flaws section, not the Force Power section (which is good). This may have come across unclear: The RP will start during the sacking, before the jedi prisoners have become prisoners. The ideas behind the sections you write about post-capture are good, but they need to be adapted to take the pre-capture start into mind. Interesting goal about freeing Coruscant. Would be interesting to see her eventual reaction when she learns Coruscant will have been returned to the republic only three days after the sacking. Otherwise a decent sheet. Nice to see a padawan that is not even close to overpowered.