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Updated!
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One more edit and it should quick - I'd feel more comfortable if his lightning step was somehow limited to bursts and it wasn't quite so fast as to be like a teleport (like it seems to read). Maybe slow enough for the eye to see, but most people (even trained masters) would have difficulty keeping up? Otherwise he's looking great!~