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Geebus creebus, this jock might actually be a character, he's getting a bit more attention than I thought he might. I've got some jerk characters lined up for a group, I'll have to make one to fit this guy. Kray, he uses an axe, right? Anything else special about 'im?
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...I...I should probably start making my sheet...Bitches ain't gonna gun hammer themselves...
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Get wired, son.
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And Addica has made his appearance
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Nefarious Prime said
Geebus creebus, this jock might actually be a character, he's getting a bit more attention than I thought he might. I've got some jerk characters lined up for a group, I'll have to make one to fit this guy. Kray, he uses an axe, right? Anything else special about 'im?


Let's see.... (I had to take a few minutes after reading this to think; he was originally just going to show up in the post sample. XD)

He used a battle axe in the exams, was strong enough to leave a gash in the floor when he used said axe, and was a massive dick about Alistair's weapons, so based on that and his in-game behavior, he's probably pretty arrogant too.

That's about it.
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And he now sports a horrible haircut where his fringe is concerned.
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This is also true. XD

On a semi-related note, I tried to make sure I understood the situation correctly before posting, but if I made an error, please let me know.
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Kray I think you understood it all pretty well xD
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Kray I think you understood it all pretty well xD
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Now that we've established that the jock is actually gonna be a character, how bout we give him a backstory that sorta explains his arrogance and rage at tying in the exam? Maybe up his specs a bit after he calms the hell down? Cause I don't know what everyone else thinks about jocks, but I'd like to think that they're disciplined, hard working peeps, if they're gonna get buffed and stronk the first place.

You know, just saying, but I reallllllly dislike stereotypes.

And imma post soon-ish. Time to go idgaf-Arara modu.
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At some point, I should probably decide what Grizel's Semblance would be.

Only thing I can think of right now that would probably fit is just ripping of Pyrrha, though.
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I'm in the same boat; the original reason Alistair didn't know how to use his was because I couldn't come up with a decent one yet. I ran with it and incorporated it into his character. XD
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Got one, sorta based on "The Glass Axe" and this one about a guy trying to marry a princess. Basically he's been entitled 'cuz his family feared he'd get kidnapped, and he did, and he escaped with the help of the girl who eventually became his girlfriend. But then his family bended over backwards to please him, so while he's skilled and strong, he's also very vain and prideful. Gonna post soon, got the whole jerk gang in a scene that should hopefully settle things for now, hope no one wants a big fight on the airship. XD Just getting to Oliver's part. :P
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Hope Reaper doesn't mind I did that with Daiki, I thought it'd be better than him just being held at gunpoint, thought this would be alright. Reaps, let me know if it's a problem, I'll change it if so. >~<
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I'm currently writing an app. I'll have it up either today or tomorrow.
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I dunno, DD, James seems a little bland, and his bio kinda doesn't make sense. It sounds like he just casually waved his hands wanting the dark to go away, and his Semblance just happened to activate then? And then he made up a deity to pray to, I dunno, seems unrealistic to me. And he's supposed to have gone to a school like Signal or Sanctum to prepare to go to Beacon, but I get the feeling from the CS that he just trained privately. But I could be wrong, as it's not explicitly stated how he trained to be a Hunter, but the vagueness is also a problem.

Personally, , and I'm not trying to be rude or anything (I'm very sorry if I come off as such. >~<), I'd change up some things. Having relatively simple weapons isn't a problem, Jaune pretty much just has a sword and shield, and having a limited Semblance isn't really an issue either (Though I think having light and blinding people as your unique power doesn't give you much to work with, but it's possible to expand with it as the story progresses), I just think his backstory could use a little work, and his personality could be expanded upon to be more unique. It just feels like the character's lacking definition, to me, I hope that doesn't come across as rude.

Also, peeps, where on the body would a Bird Faunus have their thingies? I'm thinking either wings on the head or small ones on the back, Lorelei is a Sparrow Faunus, but I wasn't sure where you guys would think would be good to have the signs.
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