[quote=@Ellri]
isn't it better to make it so subtle he's halfway through the post before he notices? and then, 3/4 through, put something that would've been very beneficial for him to notice.
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You mean we get to the point where Dede has her tongue in Jewel's ear (or Zanna's, I don't think she'd be too picky at that point) and her hand sliding up her inner thigh before pointing out that the scene may contain some sexual content?