[@Serum] Um well as you may have noticed, I'm actually fine with the use of "him/her", even though the point of my style is to be as first-person as I can - sometimes it's unavoidable~ I'm sorry if you're not as accustomed to my style, but really I think you could pretty much get away with writing in third-person at points similar to my use of "him/her" when I have to; as long as you still make use of the starry thingies (*) etc. I'm usually quite happy~! :3