Some notes (I'm co-GM/mod/whatever vaguely defined position of authority/vassalhood Lone gave me is) -While submitting the sheet in character is cool, there are details that are needed. Name, age, etc being among them. Given that other people have to describe and react to your character, a more fleshed out description is also necessary, as I couldn't really comment on any aspect of his appearance other than the mask. -I also know nothing of his personality beyond that he likes killing. Surely he has motivations, fears, etc, and we're not clear on any of those. Some more detail on that would be necessary. This character just seems hell-bent on wanton destruction, which very few people in real life are. If I'm going to go out and murder a bunch of people, I need a reason to do so. Am I a terrorist, doing so for a noble cause? Am I mentally unhinged, and if so, what led me to that point? How did he acquire the gear and training necessary to carry this out, and what is his endgame? -Not to be a killjoy, there's now way your character as is could function. I don't have the facts to check, but I very, very strongly doubt your character could murder 67 people at once and escape police custody. Overcoming 1/3rd of the police department (if he's suspected to be meta, that means NEST would be involved as well. And after he killed that many people, every single gang would be after him too, they're not fond of mass killers). There are a lot of aspects of this character that need more realism. I strongly doubt they would use helicopters with miniguns in a populated area, given their capacity for destruction. Your post seems incredibly focused on the violence and gore but less so on the details. Anybody can pick up a rifle and start on their way to hell, as Big Boss would say. We're more interested in why. As is, I just want somebody to kill this psychopath, because there's nothing redeeming or even human about him: he's just violence for violence's sake. Also, his escaping the police like that is not really plausible. They don't all stand right outside and wait. They set up rings, they cordon off areas. He would not have gotten away, especially with that kind of a track record. At all. There's no possibility. I don't think this character will be a good fit. We're looking for more fleshed-out psychological profiles and more nuanced motives. This RP isn't going to be superhumans running amok destroying everything they can. There's going to be a lot of realism to this RP, and in that regard it'll be more a deconstruction of superhuman RP's than one played totally straight. If you want to go through with this character, you'll need to flesh it out considerably. We're not going to kill you off two posts in, we're not dicks. But we also don't babysit from the repercussions of actions, and if your character murders someone, they'll be living with the consequences. If not, nothing we did in the RP would have any weight. And, in that regard, your character likely would die very early on, because there's no way that kind of lifestyle overlaps with "people who are going to live long, successful lives". Your character would die pretty much instantly, metahuman or no. The fact he made it through a building of gangsters, with door guards, is surprising; that he made it past the police is a half step from impossible. Especially carrying a hostage. Assuming the police's dogs didn't check for explosives. Or the helicopters didn't follow him. Or police snipers didn't put a cold round through his CNS the minute they heard bombs go off. Etc, etc. Also, pretty sure Hotline Miami is a deconstruction, whereas the Tormentor seems to be played straight. We've accepted killers in RP's like this before, but this kind of senseless destruction doesn't really fit in an RP, and doesn't, from what I can see in this sheet, indicate a developed, rounded character. We would need some extensive expounding upon his personality, history, appearance, etc, before we'd consider it, and the level of destruction he's caused is frankly unacceptable. No way around that. If he did a tenth of that kind of damage, he'd be Verthaven's Number One most Wanted. Killing 70+ people would have the FBI, every LEO in California, and probably the National Guard and the CIA for good measure coming to bear on his ass. He would have no allies, criminal or legal.