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I mean, I looked at the other posts and sort of assumed that spots were open. Sorry 'bout that! I'll try to be better about it in the future. :P


Don't be sorry, I was just being a nob haha
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I mean, I looked at the other posts and sort of assumed that spots were open. Sorry 'bout that! I'll try to be better about it in the future. :P


It was a joke (I think) because I think the whole goal of us waiting was.. well, more people. IIRC.
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I was like 'wha' beforehand as well, and then I read the small text and I was like 'Kyle, you sunnofabitch' hehe.
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yeah his sense of humour is strange to get used to indeed. Takes a few reads of his posts to get it sometimes
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Looking good so far! Could you (and anyone else who has submitted an incomplete CS) please remember to notify me when it is completed :)



Not one to break a promise, the first post will be up later on tonight. I'm still trying to figure out how the recruitment part is going to work though.
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Would probably be needed to check the different people if they have some useful skills they could offer. The slave trader is an exception as they can't really lose his founding but the others should at least be asked what they can do, if not tested in case of battle skills involved
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Would probably be needed to check the different people if they have some useful skills they could offer. The slave trader is an exception as they can't really lose his founding but the others should at least be asked what they can do, if not tested in case of battle skills involved


I mean as in how the posting about the recruitment is going to work. Don't want like 10 characters trying to speak to the same person at once about joining.

p.s. your characters don't need to attend the recruitment thingy, but it is recommended.
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1: Since they are official group working for the king, why not let's say use some guards or soldiers to check if the combat applicants have the needed battle skills, cause otherwise what's the point in sending the people.
2: For people such as the missionarry and the wandering priest just have them point out their good points such as the lore, medcince knowledge, etc...
^ there are some ideas, but there are a number more different ways it could be done also.
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I know how the recruitment process is going to work, I just don't know how the posts about it are going to work. It'll be Lady Buxton and Sir Chester basically just interviewing anyone suicidal enough to sign-up. Given that hardly anyone is joining (as you'll see in the IC), they're having to resort to accepting anyone capable of wielding a sword.

Ah, I'll just post it and see what happens I suppose xD
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That's the spirit!
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First post is up! The quality could have been much better, but I didn't want to delay this any longer. Get posting bitches! :P
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I am done with my character sheet. I am not such if it's clear of any mistakes. If you find one, tell me so I can fix it.

EDIT: I also think that I should change my backstory a bit.
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Will have my post up in a few hours ^_^
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I am done with my character sheet. I am not such if it's clear of any mistakes. If you find one, tell me so I can fix it.

EDIT: I also think that I should change my backstory a bit.


I like your character but there is just a few little things. Firstly, you provided a picture but didn't provide any written detail. I suppose that's fine if your character looks exactly as they do in the picture, but even then I'd like at least a line or two with details about height, size, etc. Secondly, you didn't put anything in the 'Skills and Abilities' section. Whilst you've alluded to his skills in his history, it would be nice for you to clarify and expand upon them. And thirdly, although people would have stayed in Fort Cain it was mostly evacuated by the time the horde reached Rundorm. That means that the events at the fort which you described are fine, but you might want to explain why your character didn't flee South when everyone else did. Also you said he went to the Cross Roads because 'the nearest town also was crowded by the inflected', but unless your character had only been slightly ahead of the Plague the entire time, he could have gone to Boulder Town, Titus, Minorhold or any number of small villages dotted about. So you might want to clarify why he chose the Cross Roads (e.g. He thought it would be better to get as far ahead of the horde as possible).

^I know that's looks like a lot of criticism, but really those points are very small and easily fixable. And as I said, I do like your character :)
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@Fat Boy Kyle Yay! We are finally up and running! By the way, I had mentioned in my CS that Sarah was skilled in language and I recently realized that I forgot to ask you if there are any other useful languages in this realm? I think it would be reasonable to say that Sarah could speak one or two other languages besides "the common tongue" with varying skill. What do you think? If so, which ones exist that I may claim use of?
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I was planning on writing tonight(AKA now at least for me), but I'm not feeling too great atm. So it will have to wait till tomorrow. Sorry about that ><
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