[@He Who Walks Behind]

Those shall be fixed and explained, some of which right now.

His hair is naturally black and died white, will put into sheet.

the machete isn't in the sock it's tied on the outside of the sock (so it's attached to his leg) - could have explained this better, being edited into the sheet

And your right about the ability/weakness stuff, the stingers is a good idea, and i'll take away the exoskeleton  and keep the wings.

For his motives,wants are things I wanted to keep in the IC, especially why he's been looking for and attacking people who run with The Pure. But I will add a personality. 

Also only honey bee's lose their stinger when attacking something.

I don't want to sound snarky,rude or anything.thank you for pointing these out to me.