[quote=@Aeonumbra] Backstory: O4: To be fair, as I stated, in the past four days I slept a maximum of ten hours. Though it is a two way street, as you should think about the reality of what you're writing. Armor: Armor Reference Pictures should go in the Armor area, so I don't have to scroll up to match it to the description. If it is not an armor reference picture, then put it where is should go, or leave it as is. If appearance and armor use the same reference picture, then it's not that big of a deal for it to just be in appearance. This was intended for specific references to armor, and less on the face, etc. Abilities: O2: If he's using brute force then, well, anybody can do that. The way that I perceived it as him being able to manipulate anything without any prior knowledge to how it works. A complicated puzzle lock for instance, you can't just break. Thus where I said it is possible, but only with prior experience of knowledge of the device to manipulate. Brute force is well, a given. O4(?): Are you referring to the (tip) as in, hey here's a suggestion? Or the part where I asked for clarification? Both are kind of straightforward. [/quote] Regarding the background I agree that it was a bit outlandish and have edited it accordingly to be more plausible along with many other things that were in need of clarification. As for the offense 4 regarding abilities it seems like it didn't really need to be said and came off as a bit dickish since you clearly knew it meant "he's good at hitting people." That being said I understand what it's like going through sleep deprivation (was hospitalized for it a couple of times) so no biggie. Get some sleep when you can.