Sounds cool! How's this?

[hider=My Hider]
[color=cyan][u][b]•[/b] Name[/u]:[/color] Nina Sari (Nisa)
[color=cyan][u][b]•[/b] Gender[/u]:[/color] Female
[color=cyan][u][b]•[/b] Write at least a paragraph of a character doing something[/u]:[/color] Kira walked along the beach, frowning at the trash lining the water. No one can swim there, of course, but Kira silently wished that one day he might be able to go somewhere where he could swim, like he had with his dad so long ago. Leaving his fruitless dreams at the waterside, he went to the bus stop and swiped his card at the terminal, waiting exactly 30 seconds for the bus to appear, going faster than the speed of sound on the newest tracks from NERIS, the company where Kira worked. [i]Not for much longer. Soon, soon the world will have clean water and lush forests once again.[/i] He thought as he looked out the window at the blur of scenery going by, clutching the briefcase holding the timebomb that would revert the world back to the state it was long ago once given enough power. [i]The company's main generator should do quite nicely...[/i] He smiled to himself as he thought about his plan all the way to his workplace on the other side of the country, a solid 5 minute ride.[/hider]
I take it that 'a character' means that it's not the one we'll be playing with? that bit in the example confused me.