[quote=@Shotgun Bear] The images are meant to go hand in hand with the bio, being that I drew them. I'm aware of the taboo and if [u]you'd done a closer reading of the Appearance section[/u], I think you'll find that it's part of her personality. [/quote] [quote=@Shotgun Bear] "Her taste in clothing is more due to [u]necessity than it is personal taste[/u]"[/quote] I did. A part yes, but justified by necessity. Is the picture great? Yes. Is it practical and reasonable for this setting? Absolutely Not. As for the great attractor ... lets just pose a newer, direct question. Are you intending for her to be able to manipulate gases, and solidify them? Can you justify how to use magnetism and magnetic fields to interact with them? I'm already inclined to say this doesn't quite fit in her power kit. I'm not even sure how to apply bio-/magnetism to the spectral ness of the Spark, I would just say a small amendment to that part. Maybe while she was comatose a doctor set her bones? That explanation pleases me, I feel creatively justified- she can keep it. I would even be inclined to allow this "magnetic pattern" state to work with her bones too, like.. maybe setting them perhaps-- still broken, but not horribly skewed or fragmented in odd places. Though in the abilities you should probably add something like "Magnetic Pattern" (since that's how we justify it) and use that explanation you just gave me. Ah. K. Scarf is scarfy, got it. =3 I did emphasize 'creative freedom' in my interest check, but as with all things there are certain degrees of this. There is a degree of realism and believability you as a writer must convey. I can't even really justify a reason why the sun would affect her less. I do let characters slide with clothes in general, as I said, instead of being swaddled constantly. However, I can't justify lewdness for lewdness sake. We can compromise at a pair of pants, it'll let the upper half go without horribly burning her flesh with the mighty prowess of the sun. Right, there's that no moon thing. That argument has been used against me before. You literally do not have the full picture, or scope, or plan of my world, so really, don't use my own lore against me. I am nice, I try to be lax in some areas, but my lore is my lore, and there are many things you do not know. The hammer- still needs an apt description rather than a grocery list. Also, will all those pieces, I would be amazed if she could wield it effectively, also, rockets? I thought rockets explode around her? Which brings up the question-- how do you intend to keep her from attracting every scrap of metal in ?