[@bobert778] Well put bobert, thank you.

All the sheets have been good, just some ironing needed. I don't really put compliments in my critiques because, well, It is who I am I guess- but I really enjoy the lot of them. I'm about to go make a second character-- Jon served his purpose and frankly I grew bored of him, he shall disappear until I need him again. I'm really into playing females right now, I also need a fall back girl in case Alex ever departs us.

Just to reassure you Bobert is right, I do have some very deeply constructed lore, some of you know tidbits of it just by talking about it and me wanting to bounce ideas off people, but that's hardly the crust of it. The Pizza is long and flavorful.

As I said earlier, I'm already constructing the second area once the whole "ocean trouble" is resolved, because everything is resolvable.