I'll wait for Arch to get his post out tomorrow, but if it's not up by then, I'll work on my own Tuesday so Lume is in the meeting with everyone else at the very least.
:U aha, i believe i am waiting on your for the post!
Hey, I was wondering, You can create custom races but are you allowed for custom classes? Because I was thinking about a dark knight XD if that's not possible, that's fine as i'll make a character to suit another class, though I thought it would be pretty neat, like a paladin but uses destructive magic over white magic, but isn't an adept in it, but can use it by channeling their emotions to improve physical attack strength and the like, in the shape of improving not only their own defence and attack but their allies' as well!
Also, this is still open, right? xD
Kingdom: Velenwealth - What can be said about the kingdom? It's incredibly prosperous, has a strong grip in the physical prowess of its army, has powerful connections to trade and is remarkably beautiful, engulfed with elegant and beautiful crystals and gems along its glistening marble structures and buildings, draped in a myriad of bright coloured velvet, a symbol of hope, a symbol of glee, but such peace and prosperity doesn't come without making "intellectual" sacrifices.
The Patron of Principle, in return of a prosperous kingdom, in return for the peace they maintain and their equal footing in the world, it is only just that things of equal value to life must be taken away in the process. Sacrificed lives taken of their own free will must be given in reward to the Patron of Principle to prolong their survival, but what happens when people do not wish to give away their lives? What if some are too afraid, too selfish to do so? It's simple, they can goad the desire for suicide in children and while this is a horrible act, it is not against the Patrons rule of sacrifice, as they are destroying themselves out of their own "free will". This has led to a horrible destiny for the Velenwealth, forced and eager out of their own desire to live to destroy the minds of weak willed people to force their hand to become sacrifices for their own greed and it has worked... so far.
Not many people aside from major important figureheads in Velenwealth knows about the truth of these actions, however the rumour of such an act has spread to many nations, conjuring doubt in what the kingdoms true intentions are...
Job: Dark Knight - Knights whom use the power of their negative emotions to channel power, equipped with heavy and defensible equipment, they can be classified as Knights who use magic to defend themselves and their allies, while using it as an powerful weapon in conjunction with their two handed blade, unable to use actual shields.
Dark Knights in the kingdom of Velenwealth are created in the same manner as those sacrificed for the Patron. Those who survive are leashed like dogs to their leaders and forced to fight, using the pain the kingdom has inflicted upon them to deal massive damage to the enemy, and afterwards lock them up again to deliver the agony once more until they either die in battle or kill themselves from grief and suffering.
Race: Sierra'kin
The Sierra'kin, home to the kingdom of Velenwealth are a mix between Dinosauria and humanoids, possessing a mostly human physique, graced with an athletic and strong body build, ranging from slender yet athletic to beefy and bulky, for both the males and the females, they also possess human hair. Their dinosaurian traits come in the form of their eye iris', eye colour and possessing sharp claws and scaley footed talons. They also possess patches of thick powerful scales along their body though they do not coat their whole form, but a majority. Like dinosaurs, they also possess feathers, primarily along their elbows, backs and ears, these can range from white, to blue, black, red, and other variants, their scale and feather colours are usually different.
This needs more stuff if id be willing to approve a dark knight into the adventure. Pm me with some added details of the kingdom and we'll enter a process of making this kingdom and character work within the setting.
For right now I'd like you to define this patron with information about his aspect. It appears to be sacrifice but that's not increadiby usefull for a patron if anything it seems increadibly terrifying to live in a kingdom like that. Also whos the king?
This needs more stuff if id be willing to approve a dark knight into the adventure. Pm me with some added details of the kingdom and we'll enter a process of making this kingdom and character work within the setting.
For right now I'd like you to define this patron with information about his aspect. It appears to be sacrifice but that's not increadiby usefull for a patron if anything it seems increadibly terrifying to live in a kingdom like that. Also whos the king?
eh... alright, didn't think i needed to add THAT much stuff... care to send me a PM on stuff i need to add....? I mean, yeah the idea is its suppose to be terrifying, and as for rulers i didn't exactly think on that!
And on the whole patron thing, the whole sacrifice thing is all about what the people are willing to give up to live happily, give one thing, take away another, eye for an eye mentality.
eh... alright, didn't think i needed to add THAT much stuff... care to send me a PM on stuff i need to add....?
Sure. Ill send you the character template at the first page along with some tips based on the work of other players. Well get your character a kingdom into the story as long as you'd be willing to world build and dream of velenwealth as if it were a second home.
Sure. Ill send you the character template at the first page along with some tips based on the work of other players. Well get your character a kingdom into the story as long as you'd be willing to world build and dream of velenwealth as if it were a second home.
That's... kinda what i've been doing already? But it's not been enough I suppose... ho boy, now i'm depressed xD
I mean it just seems like i'm barely being tolerated and if the idea is stupid or goes against your rp then just say so, i'd rather not waste anyones time... ^^
Nevermind, it's clear i'm just making a fool out of my self with terrible writing... been gone two months and its clear i'm still a useless piece of rubbish, sorry for wasting your time with that, I spent 4 hours working on an application, but I guess my writing isn't good enough or my ideas, I understand, i'm sorry I made a fool out of myself, back to depression, i guess... Sorry this pathetic piece of trash bothered you at all...
I don't think he means it like that. Colt is pretty nice, I think he just wants your place to fit into the RP really well. Don't get discouraged.
One of my character sheets on another RP got torn apart by the gm/co-gm like they were a pair of starving coyotes. That was fun >.> I spent a full night making it, and woke up to pretty long paragraphs of things I needed to change.
Also, yeah, @SiliconColt, assume Lume is there. I'll post for her reacting to everything after we've moved forward abit. I don't want to delay you any further.
Ideas: patron- diablo/Tiamat. Both would explain the darker vibe an Tiamat would explain the evilness of the kingdom. And just like Cecil, this could be an attempt to repent.
Ideas: patron- diablo/Tiamat. Both would explain the darker vibe an Tiamat would explain the evilness of the kingdom. And just like Cecil, this could be an attempt to repent.
:0 i sense a story in that paragraph! I already feel tge creative juices flowing. :0 continue! Like whos the dark knight?
maybe the illegitemate son of the king, trying to rid his father's kindom of it's corruption and evil! Cursed and hated by all of his people, but still thinking for them first.