Well, here's what I'll do: Option 1: Have me edit my post. Option 2: Both of you reply, and THEN I'll post again and find the damn thing. Option 3: You take very limited control of Rurik and have him detect it in YOUR(Rune or Mystech) post. (basically, say something like "Rurik would hear, blah blah blah and pointed blah blah/so-and-so noticed his head turn and look blah.") Also I still want Rurik to have the first crack at the thing. Don't worry, I won't do anything huge... but I have a scene in my head I REALLY want to write...