eeehheheh. Believe me. I know aaalll about bad roleplayers. I RP frequently on F-list. It's depressing. 
And from what I've read your RP seams fine. xD. My biggest complaint is the constant use of first person. [b] [i]seriously why does everyone here use first person that used to be completely taboo. Am I just old fashioned or have I found a weird little pocket where this is normal?[/i][/b]

But hey, whatever works for you. xD