Murps. Nah, it's cool GNem. I want bad girl Polly to go eat at McD's so she knows just how yucky the food is. Gunna get her to be more in touch with her vegetarian side since she's gunna bond with a little bunny :3 PICKLE'd MEAT IN GREASE combo please... SUPERSIZE MEH!!! XDD

But okay. Two things:

Un! Polly has a very,very edible animal buddy. U,u! But! Anyone's animal tries to eat Polly's bunny and it gets all stabbity'd! Hai-YAH!!! And shot! ~KA-BLOING!!!!~ you dead! :P

Deux! I dun like the IC update in the subs part of the site. Dun always realize someone has posted since it's not too obvious. Needs like flags or oooohhh.... shiny flashing stars "sparkle-sparkle~~!" right? RIGHT! 

But for serious now.

Wulfenheart! I dun see why you think your post is lame? Looks good to this bunny^^ It's just an intro, right? I always start getting into the character by about the third post meself... My only suggestion is that you double-space between lines of dialogue to make it easier to reads!^^ But yeah, liked it! Kinda' like a nicer version of what happened with Polly in my post ;P