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I'll have Nor pushed into her if you want, but it'll be a few hours, at work, and have to wait for crimson to post :P
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Oh no trasfer student Sharkboy sempai has bumped into me -dokidoki-

Perhaps. Though at such a point we may as well do a colab.
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*stares awkwardly at that last post as I rethink my life*
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-_- that's never gonna die now is it, what have I done XD


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"What is dead may never die. But rises again harder and stronger."


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Aight, I'll write him getting off the ship and wandering around till the point he'd meet her, then we can collab on the next round. I'd do it tonight but not gonna be available much tonight,got errands and shit to do.
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Gonna have to call bullshit on Ferrins post, no way in hell he has enough aura to do all that. you need to either nerf the semblance significantly, or massively increase the amount of aura it uses.
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Sorry I couldn't be around for a Cinis/Diana collab post, I'm currently working off of limited and inconsistent computer time
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It's cool.
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Fair warning, I may be reevaluating some characters soon as I've begun to notice severe issues that previously escaped my examination.
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Gonna have to call bullshit on Ferrins post, no way in hell he has enough aura to do all that. you need to either nerf the semblance significantly, or massively increase the amount of aura it uses.


1) His aura is rather strong. Remember, he came from 3rd generation hunters, He was trained from a very young age.
2) I implied that he took breaks, I just didn't mention that part directly because it would mess with the flow.
3) It was rather difficult for him, I was/will mention that in later posts.
4) Something like that isn't unusual, remember that the canon test where they took down the two massive Grim happened before they started at Beacon. So having that much ability is not unusual.
5)Most of the limits of any aura is not actual strength but how creatively they use it. His requires brain power, which he has.
6)His aura is very dangerous one slip up (and I will make him slip) and he could badly injure himself.
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Meh thought of some thing better than the cliched bump meet , in fact it's a fun little concept that's been shown to be prevalent throughout the world of Remnant.

Racism against Faunus. Should be fun.
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Fair warning, I may be reevaluating some characters soon as I've begun to notice severe issues that previously escaped my examination.


And what would be the nature of these "severe issues?"
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I'll explain them as I go.
Don't worry, though, Leon is fine.
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1) His aura is rather strong. Remember, he came from 3rd generation hunters, He was trained from a very young age.
2) I implied that he took breaks, I just didn't mention that part directly because it would mess with the flow.
3) It was rather difficult for him, I was/will mention that in later posts.
4) Something like that isn't unusual, remember that the canon test where they took down the two massive Grim happened before they started at Beacon. So having that much ability is not unusual.
5)Most of the limits of any aura is not actual strength but how creatively they use it. His requires brain power, which he has.
6)His aura is very dangerous one slip up (and I will make him slip) and he could badly injure himself.


1)My character Garen is fourth generation, trained his entire life whilst living in the wilderness outside the kingdom and actively fighting Grimm from the time he could use a weapon, not to mention a direct descendant of a living legend. He's a fucking prodigy and couldn't pull that shit off.
2)If it's flow versus believability, take believability. any time one of my characters expends a large amount of aura, they show signs of it, regardless of the flow of the scene.
3)Please show limits clearly and consistently.
4)teams of 4 students, all of which have been shown or stated to be of well above average skill or ability (except Jaune, but he's some sort of tactical genius waiting to happen)
5)Aura is a metered ability, like Mana. it recharges fairly quickly, but Ruby, from empty, takes about a minute to fully recharge (as can be determined by playing the Grimm Eclipse pre-alpha.)
6)Then why the hell would he climb to the top of the highest damned building on campus just to make an entrance? blatant and excessive showoff.

When I was originally examining the character, I had concerns about the semblance, as it is extremely specific and, frankly, TOO useful.

Now, I've got a couple other characters to reexamine.
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Fuck that was depressing to write.
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Poor Norsun.

Nice setup for someone to jump in though.
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For future reference, 2nd year or later students at this point would be hesitant at best to mess with a faunus, since pretty much all of them know about Agrus Grau of team WGRN hospitalizing Cardin while protecting his younger cousins. New students are going to be more prone to it, but they will learn better VERY quickly.
tl;dr, don't expect too much punishment if he fucks up some racist asshole in self defense.
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Thanks. Is it sad I'm actually considering making the guy beating the shit outta him an OC I might use in a different RP, thinking he lost his dad during the Faunus's fight in the revolution, and his brother was a guard on dust shipments who got killed in a White Fang hit.
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I think the group of boys are meant to be other hopefuls as well - and now I really hope they fail initiation.
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