[quote=KillamriX88]
Well, I don't run this RP, but here's my opinion...No. Just no. It's been a long time since a character sheet has screamed "Mary-Sue" at me badly. I mean seriously, every time you come close to describing some sort of weakness or personality flaw, you immediately go back and describe how he isn't that bad. He's arrogant, but not above praising opponents, he's cold and careless but gains respect through his actions, he has no martial arts training but he's amazing at hand-to-hand anyway... while also having crazy powerful magic.

Oh, and he's super smart and stuff.And are you "Despite not knowing other magic styles he does have enough knowledge to tutor others in their magic style. He can also identify magic from seeing it's effects making investigations a relative breeze."And all at the young age of 23... .I may have overstepped my bounds here, and if so I apologize... but I really think this character needs a looooot of work. Starting over might even be better.

Edit: OK, went back and saw the post you made where you explained what you wanted to do with your character. Makes SOME of what you put make sense, but for the most part my opinion still stands...
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1. Personality = Vegeta from Dragonball Z. I don't really care how you feel about his personality. Actions speak louder then words. Gaining respect through actions does not subtract from being cold and careless to others through words. They are incredibly far apart to be honest. I could be the most asshole boxer in the world but in the ring i'm like Mike Tyson in his prime. Therefore my actions in ring garner respect for what I can do but you can hate my personality. Same thing can be attuned for arrogance. If you impress him then yes he will praise that you were stronger then thought but, that doesn't neglect that he can still feel as though he's better then you. 

2. You do know that like..most mages in Fairy Tail are amazing at hand to hand despite having great power? You do know that you don't have to be a martial artist to be a great fighter? 

3. He doesn't train in other styles but he does know of them I.E. in connection with magical knowledge thanks to Pollux's training. That is like a boxing coach or anyone highly knowledgeable within certain arts. Just because they don't train in it themselves, doesn't mean they can't help train others. Plus it does not say he's the perfect teacher and can teach people any style he wanted

4. 23...do you know how powerful most of the Fairy Tail Wizards are by just the age of 20? 23 is reasonable within the world of Fairy Tail. Plus he's not an average mage. No one in this rp is just an average mage or else it wouldn't focus on us if you understand what I'm saying.

[quote=datadogie]
I agree. Plus, we've already got the three lost magic users, so the magic type would have to be changed to just Caster. Plus, that's like, what, three different types of magics you have? Repair, Magic and Heavenly. I also can't help but notice that Heavenly Body magic appears to have lots of different types of magic hidden in, such as fire magic, not to mention that Supernova produces almost the same amount of power as a Fire Dragon Slayer, a bit OP. You've also got a bit of Gravity magic in there, and a lot of other things.Sorry if I'm acting a little bossy. It's just that that character seems a little overpowered.
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That arm isn't changing. It's something me and Marc have worked out pretty damn hard especially for the plot of the rp itself. 

You do know that like..most mages in Fairy Tail have like a gajillion magics. Also Repair isn't much but to repair clothing and the arm is innate and not fully controllable. Its not something he learned. Its something that was forced on to him. 

You do know what Heavenly Body Magic is...right? it uses attributes from the cosmos I.E. Stars, Planets, ETC. Gravity is part of planets and stars. Not to mention Altairis spell is the same spell Jellal uses and it has gravity within it. That's canon. Stars produce heat. Drake is able to replicate that heat. It burns hot like fire. Dragon Slayer Flames are...guess what....fire except that I don't have the versatility of a Flame Dragon Slayer or well the real force behind it. It's just...heat. Nothing concussive added to it. How many people, even the weaker people, take Natsu's flames to the face without being burned heavily or feel just fine afterwards? Most and Natsu has a concussive force behind his flames. Flames produce heat. He uses heat, not actual flames. 

Its like people scream OP without even putting real thought into the claim.